sob sob :((
feeling really low,
i have nowhere to go,
i just wanna know,
y only my ego?
i scribble with anger ,
tremble with pain ,
but y?
hope is rusting ,
patience aint helping ,
fear is creeping,
pain is biting ,
i m still waiting.......
i have nowhere to go,
i just wanna know,
y only my ego?
i scribble with anger ,
tremble with pain ,
but y?
hope is rusting ,
patience aint helping ,
fear is creeping,
pain is biting ,
i m still waiting.......
4 Comments:
pure, unadeltrated feelings, xactly wat 1 wud xpect frm a crazy metalhed lyk apeksha!
cant wait 4 another installment of rhymes!
keep rokin!
hey, thanx for that yasir ! and must tell the others around! tat yer poems r just amazing! .... kudos!! keep the spirits roaring!
rock on!
heyyy babe not bad at all .... rock on ... but i see the similar state of mind in all the stuff u write ..... may be u should start writin about somethin happy in life
n y ways c ya
hey!
true everyone says so ,
and yes will try to do so from now on!
thank u for tat!
cya around!
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