Thursday, July 07, 2005

sob sob :((

feeling really low,
i have nowhere to go,
i just wanna know,
y only my ego?
i scribble with anger ,
tremble with pain ,
but y?
hope is rusting ,
patience aint helping ,
fear is creeping,
pain is biting ,

i m still waiting.......

4 Comments:

Blogger Shaikh Yasir Ahmed said...

pure, unadeltrated feelings, xactly wat 1 wud xpect frm a crazy metalhed lyk apeksha!
cant wait 4 another installment of rhymes!
keep rokin!

6:59 AM  
Blogger Acetic Pill said...

hey, thanx for that yasir ! and must tell the others around! tat yer poems r just amazing! .... kudos!! keep the spirits roaring!
rock on!

7:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

heyyy babe not bad at all .... rock on ... but i see the similar state of mind in all the stuff u write ..... may be u should start writin about somethin happy in life
n y ways c ya

7:50 AM  
Blogger Acetic Pill said...

hey!
true everyone says so ,
and yes will try to do so from now on!
thank u for tat!
cya around!

10:46 AM  

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