another one?
this is bout another pal!
15 long years,
how retentive they may seem,
things being too clear,
there goes a cheer scream.
having beem together
in the naughtiest of deeds,
i dare not forget
the creepiest of all dreams,
walking or jogging through
best of our memories,
who remembers the
hot ! hot! steaming cakes.
kiddish or childish,
she has always been,
sentimental or emotional,
ofcourse,as a teen.
over friendly at times,
quite a social butterfly,
thoughts that chime,
if it wasnt for the scary fly.
a smile followed by a giggle,
she loves to fiddle,
talks that drizzle,
fun times r worth the dribble.
sulabh or jade gardens,
laughs invade,
so many stupid things,
thus,my thoughts fade.
a long one ! i confess ! quite true by itself!
15 long years,
how retentive they may seem,
things being too clear,
there goes a cheer scream.
having beem together
in the naughtiest of deeds,
i dare not forget
the creepiest of all dreams,
walking or jogging through
best of our memories,
who remembers the
hot ! hot! steaming cakes.
kiddish or childish,
she has always been,
sentimental or emotional,
ofcourse,as a teen.
over friendly at times,
quite a social butterfly,
thoughts that chime,
if it wasnt for the scary fly.
a smile followed by a giggle,
she loves to fiddle,
talks that drizzle,
fun times r worth the dribble.
sulabh or jade gardens,
laughs invade,
so many stupid things,
thus,my thoughts fade.
a long one ! i confess ! quite true by itself!
9 Comments:
nice one aye..by now, even i know who priti is..lol .. a good tribute to a friend! Cheers
nice one aye..by now, even i know who priti is..lol .. a good tribute to a friend! Cheers
school girl stuff, with all the rhyme...:))
seriously speaking its real good
thank u aman for that!
and karthik, it more or less aint appreciating! thank u tho!
:-)
pretty good......
maite...why dont you write a poem on me?
Can I have the contact number of Priti?
hey,i wud love to write bout that! feels disgusting u know! the puke! YUCK! dont remind me!
i wanna get pissed drunk again! helps me vent my frustration! and keeps me elevated!
hey i like this one...looking forwd to some more... keep flexing ur poetry muscles...
hey, who is this?
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