Friday, July 29, 2005

another one?

this is bout another pal!

15 long years,
how retentive they may seem,
things being too clear,
there goes a cheer scream.

having beem together
in the naughtiest of deeds,
i dare not forget
the creepiest of all dreams,
walking or jogging through
best of our memories,
who remembers the
hot ! hot! steaming cakes.

kiddish or childish,
she has always been,
sentimental or emotional,
ofcourse,as a teen.

over friendly at times,
quite a social butterfly,
thoughts that chime,
if it wasnt for the scary fly.


a smile followed by a giggle,
she loves to fiddle,
talks that drizzle,
fun times r worth the dribble.

sulabh or jade gardens,
laughs invade,
so many stupid things,
thus,my thoughts fade.







a long one ! i confess ! quite true by itself!

9 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice one aye..by now, even i know who priti is..lol .. a good tribute to a friend! Cheers

10:15 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice one aye..by now, even i know who priti is..lol .. a good tribute to a friend! Cheers

10:18 AM  
Blogger Karthik L G said...

school girl stuff, with all the rhyme...:))


seriously speaking its real good

7:14 AM  
Blogger Acetic Pill said...

thank u aman for that!


and karthik, it more or less aint appreciating! thank u tho!
:-)

9:58 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

pretty good......

7:30 AM  
Blogger Ritesh Nadhani said...

maite...why dont you write a poem on me?

Can I have the contact number of Priti?

10:10 PM  
Blogger Acetic Pill said...

hey,i wud love to write bout that! feels disgusting u know! the puke! YUCK! dont remind me!
i wanna get pissed drunk again! helps me vent my frustration! and keeps me elevated!

8:42 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey i like this one...looking forwd to some more... keep flexing ur poetry muscles...

4:58 AM  
Blogger Acetic Pill said...

hey, who is this?

10:45 AM  

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